My first blog ever

This is my first blog post ever!! I figure it might be a nice start to get criticism on book reviews also, my own personal work anything constructive!! I know I have a problem with run on sentences and punctuation nice and harsh advice is appreciated but nothing mean please....And just so this isn't going to be boring I will include stories from my life I'm a full time waitress at a casino in a dangerous part of town. Because of this job I HAVE seen it ALL!